CRITIQUE AS ARTISTIC DEVELOPMENT

Feeling stuck with your short story or short script draft? Looking for direction and a fresh eye to help clean off the creative gunk? Are you tired of lackluster feedback and want something to bring your project to the next level? I’ll take my 5 years of experience writing stories, scripts, and shooting short films to help you get your draft where YOU want it to be!

WHAT YOU GET:

> 3-5 Pages of critique and feedback for short stories (15k and under) and short scripts (20 pages and under).
> Two in-person or video call meetings with me to discuss your goals before I read your work, and a follow-up to further discuss the feedback and next steps.
> In-depth breakdowns of what works, what doesn’t, and the impression your work imparts. My goal is not to help you create a more sellable script, but instead to help you refine and strengthen what is already there.

DA COST OF BUSINESS:

I charge a $50 flat fee for each "“Round”. These rounds include…
> A prelim meeting (1-2 Hours)
> 3-4 days to develop my critique and feedback
> Follow-up meeting (1 hour)

If you are satisfied with your first round, you may purchase another round for an additional $50. So on, and so forth.

IMPORTANT NOTE
I am not a professional editor
, and while I can and will make grammatical suggestions, I am not trained to edit your prose into publication-ready form. I am here to help you refine your story, themes, characters, etc.

Don’t trust me? Trust my clients!

“I read your feedback and the problem is now I’m never gonna be able to write anything without you… My God you are thorough.”
Sam Romersa - Writer/Director